Please critique, the guy on the left looks wrong for some reason. Also, should I consider my stuff anime/manga anymore?
The rear character's head is massive, as for the whole character in general. The lighting isn't particularly constant on both characters. Get some reference for the gun; as of now it looks like some weird stapler-hot glue gun hybrid device. Finally, it's not especially clear whats going on. Is the rear character prepping a backhand? Rolling a bowling ball? Attempting shadow puppets?
I think some studies with pencil and paper would be useful. The general rendering isn't horrible, but you need to get the basics solid before you move on to digital.
She’s ready to ice that cake after being given an offer she couldn’t refuse. Trouble is the guy in front is getting in the way of the cake. Jokes aside other than the sizing problem, it’s okay. He might be a midget...