DStraX- thanks, ill look into it ( and will be better on the next update i hope)
Iddi- yeah the arm will be fixed to! and ass for the belly im going to add even more shadow under it so that its not pointing out (think i did i bit on this update)
Today i did some more, desided i wanted more girls in the picture, so i started on a new one instead of finishing the last one. guess its ok to get some composition coming along slowly(even though i should have started out that way...
MORE CRIT PLOX!
digger julius som pappa^^ han kler det lissom! du pwnder med olje da.. D:
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Last edited by DStraX; September 4th, 2009 at 11:49 AM.
Seems the links of my older stuff are broken /:
should i upload some of that stuff direcly on CA?
anyhow here are some sketches n stuff. Started school again ill post some of the paintings i have been doing there soon.
Ahhh, dette var fete tegninger man! liker virkelig det du kommer med her! Helt utrolig, Inspiration Explosion:-P
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as I said earlier, nice study. about his foot, I agree it was awkward. something that use to help is to draw the platform or line out the perspective of which he stands in. I like step 3 a lot. Step 4 almost got a bit messy. I like the highlights, but be careful not to ruin the construction!
Hey you are doing great on defining planes I think. I like that.
In the 2 woman study in #91-#93 I think that the first 2 feel better than the last, because of the smudged areas in the last one. Looks a bit messy there ..
The latest portrait is good, but I am no super fan of that eye. It is not so much that it doesn't look right, but if you take into the equation the roughness of the other strokes, the eyes are just a little to rendered. Mind you I am nitpicking, but it is a valid point. Also, there are not NEARLY enough updates here. From here on I excpect daily updates, and I will be keeping tabs on wether or not you show up for sunday sketch group. I am watching you!
Now on the up side, the last couple of pieces show a lot of improvement, even from the things you did this spring, so you are keeping it flowing man, but try and step it up, do more studies, and don't be affraid to mix it up between really through studies like the dames you did, and some real intuitive poses and stuff^^
Hey quality studies...it seems your Studying all there is to study in order to improve, if you continue in this fashion i guarantee you will improve...just do some amazingly finished pieces of work in between all the studying...
Keep it up