The world is filled with people who were given great natural gifts, sometimes conspicuosly flashy gifts, yet never produce anything. And when that happens, the world soon ceases to care whether they are talented.
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Nice little clip.
You did a good job with sound.
My biggest gripe would probably be about the zoom out just before the alarm goes off. I feel this weakens the impact of the alarm.
I think it would've worked if you had animated the second hand and as the second hand ticked onto 12, the camera zoomed out, pause, then alarm.
The animation for when the clock is balancing on the edge was nice to start off with, but then he stopped moving so much and it was unclear exactly what he was doing.
Maybe see if you can find some old Loony Toons and the likes - I'm sure they have a lot of scenes with this kind of action.