Last edited by Cyberman; December 1st, 2013 at 08:13 PM.
Good concept and very good colour organisation. Batman's head and chest are nicely realised. However, there is some very sloppy drawing in the hands, and the darks under the girl's body really need some serious attention - it is causing a major problem with those greenish dangly forms that might be Batman's legs or might be some crazy tailcoat thing the girl is perhaps wearing - can't tell which.
I know that all sounds a bit negative but this could be a very powerful piece if these things were properly fixed.
Love the attitude and drawing of the girl's boots and the graphic they make with the main figure.
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Nice work! I agree about the hands. They need to be a little more clearly defined. Also, although I like the form created with the girl's boots against the cape, they are slightly out of proportion. All in all, though, these are minor problems, it is a great piece!
I love the face! It's so stylized but 3d looking Aside the from batman's hands, I think Batman's legs could be lowered in value so they get less attention from the viewer.
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I like this one SO much better than your star wars fan art. Although it is still a bit orange, this one is much tighter and more polished.
One thing that jumps out at me is Rachael's lips. I am not sure if you were trying to do a joker style mouth or a regular one, but the lips don't really connect like that. It is feeling a bit more like she is trying to look that way rather than her being dead and limp. I think it is because in that shot some of her facial muscles (like the ones in the forehead) look like they are being flexed where if she were dead they would be limp.
Although that is just an assumption too. Is she dead?
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When I first saw the piece the girls legs and Batmans chest kinda blended together seeing how the light shining on the girls leg is the same as his chest
And I agree with the stuff above, particularly about the darks of the girl
Judging by the background it seems to be a fairly lighted area
So I think their would probably be more light and highlights to separate the two forms more
Very nice though
This is a really powerful piece, but I agree, Batman's, I'm assuming legs, need much more attention, so do hers, and there seems to be a random floating dark olive colored shape behind racheal's shoulder and neck. Other than that, this looks greattt
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batmans legs and hands (specifically the thumb on his right hand - imo shouldn't be visible). Also, is the girls left leg...maybe it is broken...it just doesn't look very natural for her toe to be aimed perpendicular to her other foot.
I am very fond of the piece...some of the color can be tweeked to make it more believable too...his right leg...her thighs...
WOW! 96% awesome!
I agree that his legs should be obscured by shadow.
1) almost everything
2) love the colors
3) lots of impressively flawless points of interest.
My least favorite spots:
1) Batman's hand under her torso looks unfinished and inconsistent with thestyle of the rest of the piece
2) Batman's legs look unfinished and might be better hidden in shadow
3) the choice to have her eyes open makes her face distracting in my opinion.
4) her left leg does seem to be at a weird angle. slightly distracting.
Really looks great overall though.
very nice painting
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Gorgeous work dude . Love it totally, give me a feeling of Bruce Timm's Batman but with another view
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