my first WIP here. I had an idea - big creature eating victim (woman ) and how she is screaming in his stomach.
His tentacles begin behind stomach and catching victims then go throught mouth, stomach (like buttery) to end - second mouth with teeths.
first picture - sketch, scene with some ritual and eaten victim - another is "waiting".
second picture - put on some basic colors and for this concept I decided that I don`t use more complex scene
third picture - not finish yet, work on details (face, end of the legs ..) ,chracter inside stomach and thinking about color of stomach...
next progress I`ll post here
Last edited by mvocet; December 15th, 2008 at 04:08 AM. Reason: Finall concept
I agree with Duman, and moreover, I think you should redesign its "feet". I don't see how it can balance otherwise. It's a solid concept otherwise
I really liked the pencil sketch. It gave the creature purpose and a reason to have its mouth open. It's scarier right before you are eaten, rather than after.
There should be some green reflection on the legs, since you have it reflecting on the floor.
The legs could also use more detail, they seem like stilts rather than legs. Maybe add veins or slime to them, which is what a stomach is covered in anyway.
I think a thicker, uniform tongue, would be more menacing. RIght now, It looks like its breathing green fire.
Last edited by ShockWave; December 10th, 2008 at 05:13 PM.
I think the comment about the tongue is right. Or just don't make them them so asymmetrical. A background could help make it look a little more gruesome, give it more story, per say. Is it just me, or is the left most leg not connected to anything?
thats creepy as hell, nice job
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"I have transcended that phase in my intellectual growth where I discover humour in simple freakishness. What exists is real; therefore it is tragic, since whatever lives must die. Only fantasy, the vapors rising from sheer nonsense, can now excite my laughter." - Lord Pirmence of Castle Lutez
That's SO kickass and creepy. O_O Awesome work.