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the pose seems to be just there and not really doing anything angel wings don't normally stay stationary and i think those "shadows" under his feet aren't really justified. The best way to go with a rough sketch might i add is to do another one of the same subject doing something more interesting
i agree with you on the shadows feet, but something on his pose that i really like it, maybe his look, like if he where guide by a divine force ( good or evil ) , thanks for the reply, here is the fixed shadow.
Last edited by Kilmyneo; October 17th, 2008 at 05:26 PM.
The pose is ok, I think. Looks like a kind of big lug that can't think without divine intervention or something. What bothers me is the shoulder-guys' poses, which are slightly altered copies of the main character's. Giving each of them a more unique pose, maybe one that indicates something about their personality or role in the drawing, could make the drawing more interesting.
I'd also reconsider the blackness of the shadowed area in his lower body. Shadows aren't really black, but a darker shade of the object's color mixed with the opposite color of the light (shadows cast under the yellow sun appear purple. Try to use different colors for shading, maybe purplish-blue. Same goes for the clouds' grey.
Good tip and constructive critique,thanks Chat Noire! i will do.