I like the general color pallet you have chosen. The foggy warm colors int he sky really are very nice. I think what would benefit the piece more is tightening up the drawing by checking perspectives, size relationships, forms and shapes and how they adjust in comparison to the horizon line, and working on edge control. Fear not these are all things we all can improve in, even myself. Just remember your fundamental rules and you will go far. I look forward to seeing an update.
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