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I created this thread to ask you to critique and advise me what is wrong with this two works..
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"A Cup of Tea?"
Thank you for seeing this.
I expect your advises and comments
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In Japanese Culture, the line weights are disproportionate. Objects closer to the "viewing point" should be thicker, and objects further away should be thinner. However, your tea cup is "spot" on in that sense My only fight is the handle on the spoon seems a bit off with the shading and makes the spoon appear to bend more than necessary. I dont know how to address it, but thats me just being very nit picky
Nice works really dig the tea-cup.
It took me a while to figure out that the top three were actually one big drawing I think that the cause of this is due to the fact that the perspective isnīt the same on all three the one furthest to the left looks like itīs been build on a hill with no regards for the people living there, having to crawl there way through the house, where as the two others have a pretty straight perspective (horizontal-line).
Might wanna draw a horizont-line through all three.
Thatīs about it Keep it up
I haven't realized the "line weights" yet xD But yes, that's true. It's a mistake that I'll try not to do on my next projects. Thanks
The spoon of the cup is a little bit too saturate. Maybe if I used a grey color it would look better
Thanks for your comment and thanks for the critique
thanks for comment. When I noticed that perspective error it was too late: I had already started to "color" it. :s
The japanese piece is very nice. Just work on the line weights. Look around you when you are outside. when things are closer you can see the lines that forms around the object much clearer compare to objects in the backgorund.
Other than that dude, keep it up.
Why do you have that square in the middle of the tea cup? That bit looks like a photo and I don't understand the reason for it.
thanks laughing I will try to improve it
Black Spot, the tea cup is based in a detail from a poster. That's the square pasted into the canvas. Got it?
I like the teacup. But the way the edge of the cup just touches the edge of the table is setting up a little compositional tension that I find a touch unnerving.
I can't believe I typed that last sentence. It sounds so lunatic.
Also, I'm of two minds about the marks in that piece. The way your lines neither follow the direction of the light nor the shape of the object. Part of me sort of likes that, in a graphic-y, poster-y way. Part of me wishes the lines were more illustratorly and informative. Or maybe just less spikey.
I was once on the receiving end of a critique so savagely nasty, I marched straight out of class to the office and changed my major (sketchbook).
I don't understand this commentAlso, I'm of two minds about the marks in that piece. The way your lines neither follow the direction of the light nor the shape of the object. Part of me sort of likes that, in a graphic-y, poster-y way. Part of me wishes the lines were more illustratorly and informative. Or maybe just less spikey.
Could you explain it better please?