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I really enjoyed browsing through this. Your sketch pages are so busy and creative, full of interesting characters. You have quite an unique and interesting nightmarish fantasy surrealism thing going on. Your pencil skills are amazing, it's just the colours that are not quite there yet, although often a dash here and there that you give your drawings seems to work.
Some of your sketch pages are really impressive. From your first post, you've gotten a lot better with line and making your figures seem more lively and less stiff and labored. I like the way you handled the watercolor and how much texture is present in the background. Great work, keep improving.
Wow you have come along quite nicely from your earlier posts.
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I would really love some honest critiques and improvements suggestions
Renewed Study - I'm drawing again!!
Hey man! I am Dennis from CGISRAEL, I saw some sketches there and I liked them, so I stumbled upon your sketchbook here and I really like your sketches their awesome tons of potential, though dont get offended but you recycle abit it happened to me too I was too lazy to try out new stuff and sometimes still am too lazy. but I try to push myself to draw things I would consider as really hard and then I am surprised! it's not as hard as I thought.
theres a thing that bothers me with the faces you draw especially the woman, they all looks pretty much the same as if they are all sisters or its just the same character, they all have square jaw pretty much the same mouth and usually round eyes and the same nose, and you shade their noses as if they all cought a cold
I am not trying to insult I am just critisizing from what I see so I hope you can find these things helpful.
I think you can benefit alot from Andrew loomis, he has the best 6 art learning books that I know of and he explains in depth about everything and it makes sense so check it out, try looking for Andrew loomis - drawing the head and the hands.
hope you dont get offended I am just trying to help buddy you are more then welcome to enter my sketchbook and critisize me to death!
keep uploading sweet art man!
i'm not offended at all, i really appreciate you're honest critique,
i noticed that the faces i draw look similar but never thought that is a bad thing or that is a problem until some months ago i tried to do some freelance work where they asked me to draw a totaly different type of face features.
My point is that you're right, i really should try to widen up my use of techniques and styles especialy with women faces.
yeah man absolutely, don't be afraid of exploring and trying new things, just draw from life as much as possible like objects in your house fruits vegetables, and do lots of portrait drawing download portraits from Flickr.com or just google and learn face features and you will be surprised how much information our brain can absorb.
did you know there is no computer yet that matches the capabilities of the human brain?
It's been a while since I last visited this, and you have impressed me by a longshot.
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Danny_K ....yeah that is why i appreciate the old masters very much, in the 18th century they didn't have photoshop to fix their mistakes.
HerrleerzeichenS Thank you i will.
FightingSeraph thank you, i'm trying to improve as much as i can
I've been doing some intensive training in the army so i didn't have any time for sketching, though i am trying to finish this WIP, yes i know it's totaly in "my" style
but this week i really had no time to explore new things.
Lovely work, I adore your style! Keep it up!