The first one is alright, i like the second one and think its better design wise cause it has nice color contrast and a better sense of diagnal direction which complements the erratic nature of the image.
I would desaturate the backgroun of the second image a bit, or ad a subtle blue undertone so that it doesnt compete so much with the bright oranges and yellows. Very nice work.
THe first one does have contrast, but i feel that its not going anywhere. i conflict with the fact that the circles give a sense of direction but the color and the rest of the design conflict with the rythm of the circles. I think this design would be perfect given typographical elements are added. I think for me i would like to see a better division of the 3dimensional space that seems to be impled, because the lack of value contrast makes the imiage appear flat.
But nice designs, keep up the great work, your dedication and hard work is paying off!
thanks for the support, guys.
lolbbq: thanks for the feedback on those. term's over and all, and with the exception of the second one [which is ttly liek cheated off a sketch of taca i made and sorta like], I deleted all of my designs for that class. x__x
xin: happy second birthday to both of our sketchbooks~ I didn't improve nearly as much as I wanted to ;o;
still gotta keep pushing though
something from last drawing concepts session
and something really silly i found while digging through my old sketchbooks.
your work is so fluid and detailed! i really enjoy looking at your sketches. you have some really neat ideas
Always lurkin' to see what yer up to!
Wolves are always good!
kickkk ass sketchbook, lmfao at the sandwich post
Thumbs look great. Nice atmosphere. You could have played with some more splattery brush for example in the front of the grass. Those neaty little tricks can bring an environment to the next level.
As for the pen/pencil (hard to judge) that's realy awesome. Absolutely love your style you've got straight sharp angles etc. DO watch your anatomy in the bottom right dude. Hip area is kinda weird. But yea aweeesomee.
Better check the proportions on that sandwich. The burnt cheese should be three heads down.
Love your stuff, your pens just keep getting sexier.
design stuff is eyecatching,very nice,piece of advise:keep it simlpy readable and simple
keep on goin!