Thanks Cout>Mecha = I am changing clyde all together and here is my crit Clyde's head is very large and his body too adding your light, thanks!! and getting rid of dumb dots just keeping a few or maybe all done -- will post later tonight and I will try him looking left, did you mean her direction off page?
yeow! now thats just plain awesome.
I can see what you mean about Bonnie's face. The problem is it's asymmetrical because you drew it with a slant. Just select her face with the freehand selection tool and use Edit > Transform > Distort to realign it. Keep going; I love the sunny effect going on right now; can't wait to see it finished ^^
Hey squeeze! I'm loving your newest. The lighting in it is phenomenal, so natural and realistic! The movement in the couple is beautifully done. I thought humans were your big forté but then I noticed the bg and I think that one's definitely up to par! Beautiful tree, again the lighting hits it in a wonderful way.
long time passed by since i visited your SB ... but what should i say? i didnt lie when i was said that im your biggest fan, cause i got the thai chick with the gun on my desktop your colors are beautyfull as allways and your babes make me sweat a bit keep up the good work!
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Bakatron = Thanks for the words!
Xinga = So nice thank you!
dierat = Thanks and HAVE got to fix that wonky face!! Thanks for the crit and help!
Asa B = Asa B=We are coming to Iceland to see you and kiss you, Dude you rock Thanks, trying to paint light and movement in speeds, thanks for noticing ! ! !
Lateman = Desk top! Wow you are my #1 and first fan so flattered - Thanks for the fine words and you are late man... long time dude.
Going to figure study now and want to try some quick blocks live -- trying to get very quick but still verrry sloooow. K
that dragonfly is just sweet ass!
hey Kelly! I'm loving how the picture above this one is turning out. Just wanted to point out a few things that might help.
Figures-flowing with differing lines of emphasis. the conflict in this one is offscreen and is emphasized by the head angles < > and figure lines
Color-Try not to use absolute black or white except for clothes with the exception of radiosity on cloth
Planning-think I remember it being called the 3/4 rule, by placing a tictactoe grid over the pic you can control the viewers focus by trapping the eye.|/\|
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Hey Kelly. really like the dragon fly, superb. The texture of the wings are an aspect that really make the piece as well as the suface it is resting on. The Clyde painting is coming on well, as it is still in progress i don't know whether to critique just yet. Keep at it
Stolen Sky = thanks and add any crit anytime especially when a piece is an infant - that would be more than cool!! We always need more eyes than we have huh?!?
Cout-Mecca = Thank you and I will look this procedure up as soon as we are not being blasted by lightning!! signing off Robot 1 - total LOL and thanks for the paint!!
Bakatron = I looked at your SB and you are going places, Thanks for the "SWEET"! COOL!!
WE are in the middle of a huge storm gottta go zoom!!
crits - added elements - called stained glass bug sack - just trying a kind of surreal piece from a dream.
Last edited by kelly x; August 10th, 2008 at 03:07 PM. Reason: too huge!! sorry
I like the detail in the figure, but you seem to have two light sources, and a little too much chiaroscuro. Still, its very effective modern noire. You could do a lot more with dramatic lighting. Keep it comin'!
Here's stage two - will do more lighting soon and thank you dudes!! Just a rough for the back ground idea by the way...
Verehen = Dude your SB rocks!
Lateman = Your latest updates are so rockin and thanks for the little boost!!
Cout<Mecca = Thanks and will do dude!
Nice ass man!
gah. i cant keep up with how much you post.
i feel sort of odd saying this but i think you need to move the logo a bit more across and make it fllow the contours of the girls buttocks some more.
love the pose though.
Okay, I'm going to get shot but I think there's something a little off with her face. From the angle of the lips and nose it seems the far cheek is a little too far round? I just can't quite figure out precisely where her face is directed.
Otherwise, really striking image. I'm looking forward to seeing this completed.
i think there should be a little bit more skin right above her right (from my view point) butt cheek. Im not to sure though.
hope you dont mind me editing the image to show what i mean. I hardly understood what i just typed up. Anyways my point is that she looks to thin right there, and i think there should be more added. But i could be wrong, so w.e.
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my57= your correct tried to fix and thanks dude! cool circle
cout,mecca = thanks.
torstan= took her face off and still having a b of a time with it this angle sucks the b!!
bakatron = re-moved the logo good call!!
kidult = I get it your a kid and an adult?? your sketch book is the bomb dude!! "did I draw her ass too big" LOL...
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Right critiques... Its kind of hard for me to crit this one because I like it so much,
The only thing that is buging me about this one is the nose, it just seems way to big/long.
But its a cool piece you've got going here, I'm really liking the pose and the colours in the background, but somthings not right with that ammo belt... it just dose'nt seem to go anywhere.
sorry to not be of any help.
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I think I liked her before you changed her outfit. It was more iconic and I thought it read better. The only exception is the outer edge of her boob which now reads better. The highlight on the hair is quite cool with it's bluish tint, however the shadows on your skin show a tendency of getting muddy, you might want to address that.
Otherwise this is a really neat sketchbook! So much progress since the start!
for some reason I really want to pat that untouchable thing...
excellent progress here..
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