I obviously don't have it totally cleaned up, but was hoping to get some feedback on the composition and colors. What do you think?
I like the texture and colors of the background. But i dont think the blue squares over her eyes should be the same blue as the one used in the background.
Also I think it wold be nice to see some kind of contrast between the figure and the background to make things more interesting. Either a contrast of color or texture or style...I think the key to making a piece this simple interesting will be creating some kind of contrast.
My two cents
...my humble and uneducated opinion.
I like the graphic style you've captured here. It's almost like she just hopped out of the shower in an existential quandary.
I agree with mute that contrast would be your key here. Maybe mute the background a bit so the character can pop out more?
looks like a good start, but I would try using a few more tones, and then the body doesn;t look quite right (needs more curves, and whatnot) I like where you are going with it though, keep at it
thanks for all the comments guys. here's the latest update. I added a few more values to her skin and headwear. Still not sure about the background.
@mute: the blue around the eyes and in the background are two completely different blues.