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You got some good stuff here so far but the coloured Hulk bothers me.
His jawline looks pinched. In your pencil sketch you have all the mass blocked out and the shading. It seems like you threw away the original plane shading for something that makes things much more flatter. Such as the cheekbone on him.
I'd suggest going back, blocking in the light planes of the face and the darker planes and then going in for some of the details.
first couple pages of my sketch book are similar to this. I drew on drawing paper/layout bond for awhile. Both papers share a rough surface, so going to smooth was pretty annoying. Out of frustration I just drew without erasing feeling that I've gotten ripped off hehe. Anyways I'll probably never go back to regular drawing paper. It's all preference, gotta play to find your way, glad I took the gamble ^^. People seem to dig these a lot; I'm liking the cleaner stuff more personally, we'll see. Doing this type of aggressive line work has helped me tons on >5 min gestures.