Heres some stuff
Right now my goal is to finish a piece with a high enough degree
to get published in exotique 5 its a pretty hefty goal but im giving my self a pretty good amount of time to work and study and theirs really nothing to lose by trying so heres the beginning steps.
Thank u Pijus. ur deffinatly right about the girl next time i need to consider the size relationships of the bg and figures before hand more and maybe not draw them as u separate pieces it will be fixed. right now im gona put it on hold and re-evaluate the piece and mybe try think a little differenty
welll heres some stuff
this was just kind of a crappie cool down for the night kind of quick and dirty
Pijus sorry didnt make it to the muscle yet. dont be dissipointed it will come
But Photoshop sucked last night crashed and lost most of the stuff but i managed to take a screen shot of part.
well heres some stuff.
Figures from head hopfully these look decent i think im getting better with figures a lill
And im not really sure what was going on here.
Super emo and Goth kid. maybe ill revisit this idea
heres another portfolio piece im not sure which to go with though for the final. Help me choose.
I kind of like the goldish tint. Maybe i could doa a more subtle version of that.
Sketch Dump tonight.
hey, awesome update, stylish, looks intersting. i think the final one should be the second one, becouse its not just simpy black and white. and those environments, they look great, cartoonish sketch. keep up with those good studies too! cheers man! damn why im the only one whos commenting your sketchbook, hm :/
Thank u Pijus, and iv also wondered why only u comment here, i mean i do get out and make my self known on CA i think, O well they will come by force if nessicary MU AH ha ha ha.. cough cough
Enviroment pic and movie pic study NAME THAT MOVIE
umm character crap ....last one is still trying to figure out painter
And finally Figures....well torsos from head horray i think im getting it
and heres this its kind of intresting.
thats the show
For some of your face studies don't be afraid to blend the tones together. Some of them look really stark. Use the pure white sparely as highlights or looks like it's being hit by a flood light.
Your anatomy studies are coming out great.
Make a sketchbook happy, feed it a tip to improve!
Thank you STE
Agreed and thank you iv been workin on eliminating the completly flooded look of light but havent suceeded completly yet.
Sorry lots going on at the end of the school year so iv been somewhat busy heres some stuff and 2 portfolio pages
Heres two final pieces for AP
first is more of an illiustrated attempt
second is a rather small lino cut
Last edited by Demo; May 5th, 2009 at 11:47 AM.
good stuff showing all kind of improvements
Wow showing massive improvements from the first page,
liking the new stuff!
I'v got some enviroment stuff laying around too but I cant seem to find it??
Pretty much all just figure work still
Studies from Marta Dahlings pieces which i dont do justice
very quick SP
and a character attempt
Here they are I liked playing around with pretty much the same composition with these just changing up the back and midle ground, although im still pretty lost with the coloring I tryed but got fustrated my what i didnt know soo ill have to work on color alot more.
Very nice stuff, Demo
I think maybe some more studies of different faces would do you good though. I like the painting with the can and the last enviros (even though I like them best without colours )
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uggh im haveing such a hard time with colors these suck so bad
TO WORK ON
*texture...because all the textures on these are terrible
*colors....lots of work here. *helps if the moniters would be clabraited the same
*lines...these probably need help
*space...fix the others this might work better
* time managment...dang u lounge
ill post sketches and other stuff tomorrow im to upset to right now..
very cool man, geting better, goooood pencils keep those up, I like an sp painting and environs. You say you need to work on textures and lines on environments, on my opinion you should pay more attention to color, COLOR is the primary thing. Try painting only with a big brush on your photo studies, that should keep you away from small details and you would care much more of the colour. Thats for my advices dont stop man and ull become awsome, good luck
Great diversity in your art man! And you are really prolific! Cool SB
Heres some more color work, i had around 10 Pages of figure work and faces but i lost my SB o well its more about getting something done anyway still though
kind of old color studys from WU
umm more color photo work
crappie outcome of a still life
And another more advanced still life iv given up on .....maybe plaid was a bad choice to study right now ....
And if anyone could help with this im developing a kind of cartoonishh color scheme/ style for this stuff and i honestly don't know why ...probably due to lack of color knowledge please if any one has any pointers
Keep studying! I think you could try painting less complicated still lifes when ur studying colour. I found that if i have lots of objects to paint in one picture and when i fail with one of that objects i just give up on other ones and want to finish the piece faster. I suggest try sometimes to set a still-life only from one object and some kindof background, that shouldnt mess ur mind so much than a bigger amount of things. For example: Bring a lemon on a blue drapery, and study the shit out of it, try your hardest to mix colours as they are, reflection of the drapery on the lemon, hues, contrasts, lightening, make a very simple picture but realistic.
Thats for my pointers I need to go back to school now...
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Thank you Pijus ill try to work up from smaller ones in the future thats probably a good idea untill i know what im doing.
Heres some sb pages my feeble attempts to catch up to piju's ammount he gets in an update
mostly figure work from bridgmans
these first 2 are 18x24 sb pages the BIGGINs
and an attempt to paint those girls like Algenpfleger dose
...yeah i need to study more