What is this I dont even
But seriously though; What would you like feedback on? What is this? With no description it's kind of hard to figure out what's going on at all.
If it's the women you want feedback on, then it's also going to be quite hard as I assume you were going for some heavy stylization?
I can't tell what this is for either, but judging from your handwritten notes, is this a fashion drawing?
I cant read the notes and I'm not sure the butterflies and dragons are the op's own work, though I hope I'm wrong about that...
Fantastic stuff!!! Butterflies and dragons are so rarely picked up by artists these days.
The only thing that nags me is the white space between the left woman's legs, it should be blue as she is wearing a cape.
Can't wait to see more!
That looks like Vietnamese. Does this guy speak English, or did he just toss that through Google translate?
Looks like a fashion drawing, and they do have exaggerated proportions to emphasise the actual clothing design, but this is a pretty poor one even at that. The flipper feet and alien anatomy are scary.
Um...well...you have nice handwriting?
In all seriousness, though, watch out on your anatomy. Even fashion models have bones and muscles.