That looks fantastic, Sab! <3
I love how you made the atmosphere here much colder and darker, as opposed to the warm and bright colours in the Good one. Perhaps something we should keep in mind for the other characers?
So yeah, as for me, I honestly don't see much to change! I wonde maybe about having some body paint, though? It could also be white, then it could be that common link? Just a thought!
It's cool how you added a blur effect to the chains, I feel as if he's stomping towards me! Cool effect!
The background is also good, I had also imagined it being a more desolate and darker scenery. :)