I think the hardest thing about the piece on the last page concerning the composition is the square format. It would help if you stretched out the image into more of a widescreen format. (For example: Extending the left side so that you can show what they're looking at) Just a suggestion though because I find square formats a bit harder to work with.
Keep it up! Especially the badass comic pencils :P
Danny_K Thanks for the feedback man, i know about the composition and the value problems...those are definitely things that i need to work on.
skMOP Thanks for the suggestion, i did it and i think it helped a lil :D
Lil update on the pic...
Hey man I'm loving your value study and a nude pic with the pink background, Gorgeous. keep drawing.
If you need any suggestions for composition, you should pick up Jason Manley's Composition tutorial and go to public places with your sketchbook and fill it up with only thmbnail sketches. Please check out my sketchbook and feel free to comment. I would greatly appreciate it.
Klaaasssno! Add some red it was a great idea) Picture become so peaceful! Keep it up man!
Silent-samurai87 Thank you :)
dblock Thank you for the input. :)
n1frit Spasibo :D
I'm back to a daily updates...it's gonna end soon but as long as i have some time i listen to this crap UBER CRAPPPP and draw....
values from today...1, 2, 3...
and something different...
Hi mate, it was a while since I visited this place. I can see an improvement on your figures. They are definetly more dynamic and less stiff xd. Good job. And keep updating. You are one of those persons that keep me motivated so don't stop and keep pushing. Cheers! xD
Thanks mate, glad i can help ya a lil....
more value crap and trying to get used to a new and awesome brush that i made...
Interesting face above... try doing the same thing with some real faces :D
Try drawing some folks from here on CA or really any other place that has faces...
Keep 'em coming!
And also, what's the brush look like? That looks similiar to just a basic round to me.
Thank you :D the brush is round but i just "fixed" some stuff in the settings.
Here is a lil update on the "illustration" just couldn't leave it as it is, so i started to experiment....
hehe, please fix the bots butt it looks like a diaper!
keep experimenting and always find new ways of doing things thats how you progress.
ur next post will be like
"couldn't leave it like that" or "couldn't sleep without some touch ups" XD
Danny_K Thanks mate :) i promise i"ll change it, when/if i"ll get back to that pic again :P
Creusa hhh...basically now i do only 4 things:
1. Tuning my car
2. Learning to play n a guitar
3. Learning Arabic
4. Drawing and painting
so yeah i have all the time in the world to redraw and redraw some more...however it all will end from this Sunday, and i"ll get back to a once a month update or even less...that's life :(
anyways here is a gray scale wip and an update on the caroony pic.
Cheers guys :)
the gray wip is awesome! why are you gonna stop updating your progressing so fine!
It depends on a letter that i'm supposed to get tomorrow.
Originally Posted by Danny_K
If it will state what i think it will, i probably won't be able to draw/paint as much as i can now at least till Summer 2012.....but i"ll try to update my SB as much as i can though.
Thanks btw :)
Not much of an update..just been busy working on my car whole day long....
alright whatever you do good luck!
Ultimately, I think just keep doing what you're doing and you'll be fine.
Just keep trying to add color in as well :)
Awesome pencils as always mate! Beautiful job on the pink anatomy study a few post up. The values of your latest WIP are looking good, there's little too much cyan though, particularly on the face. Since there is a cool light source the cast shadows should be warmer, especially with the warm back-light.
Keep it up! I'll be having a look at the resource you provided, thanks!
Love the wip. Good composition and mood. I did a quick paintover of your piece, cuz it would take to long to explain. Hope you don't mind.
That WIP looks really cool, I love how you did the hand and your pencils rock :D
Liking the cartoon drawing a whole lot. Nice colours on the last one too
Раб мой, сия бабенья радует мой взор.
its going to be sad progressing not in the same line with you but you gotta do what you gotta do, nice WIP...
Those figures are looking as good as ever. Your digitals are improving too. 823 looking bloody brilliant. Always good looking through your stuff, keep up the good work
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Mat Kaminski Thank you i will :)
Rustveld I wish i've read your comment carefully before i worked today on the pic, oh well i"ll fix it later...thanks man :)
Ramalooke Thank you :D it helped a lot!
Sushy Thank you :D
kidult Thanks :)
Creusa spasibo gospoza :P
Danny_K Thanks man, i"m still gonna try and work as hard as i can it's just that i won't update as much...btw that stupid letter still didn't came...and i'm getting a bit nervous :upset:
Naidy Thank you i will :)
Here is a lil update on the witch girl and a pencil project that i've started... "The last Days of Io"....
Your pencils are sick! I like <click> xD
The last illustration piece is a big step forward I think ;) Watch that arm and hand though, something about it looks a bit off to me.
Can't wait to see it finished.